A QUESTION for readers of Oonaverse

[avevale_intelligencer]

Were you thrown by the shift from chapter 21 to chapter 22? Did I make it clear enough what was happening?

I have an explanatory snippet ready to slot in if it's needed, but I would very much appreciate your guidance on this.

Thank you in anticip



pation.

Originally posted on http://avevale_intelligencer.dreamwidth.org. Comment here or there or both if you wish.

Comments

[eintx.livejournal.com]

If I'm the average reader the snippet would be helpful!
But maybe I'm only the stupid doesn't-usually--read-sf exception. :)

[legoline.livejournal.com]

Hi Zander,

I just wanted to let you know that for the past few weeks my life has been kind of crazy (see: unexpected and unusual radio silence on my blog), so I haven't really had the chance to read your new chapters. I hope Life (TM) will sort itself out soon-ish so that I can get caught up. It's been really great seeing you update so much, though. I admire your output. Wow, you're prolific!

[katyhh.livejournal.com]

Extremely prolific, I agree :)

[katyhh.livejournal.com]

I have not even started, sadly, so my question, in case you were not clear, will probably come in one or two months... Bear with me, please :)
These days, I don't manage to get around to reading a lot, and there's two other books that want to be finished before I go visit Avevale again. Ah, to be in school again and read all evening without falling asleep over my book ;)

[the-magician.livejournal.com]

What Katyhh said ... same here ... I haven't read anything that's not been for work in months ...

[zanda-myrande.livejournal.com]

Thank you all for responding. It really does mean a lot.