One more time

[avevale_intelligencer]

In this post, I linked to a story of mine that I recorded, and asked for feedback. Still quite interested, if anyone would like to give it a listen. There's still a major plot hole to spot, but it's only worth fixing if there's an audience.

Comments

[patoadam]

Beautifully done!

The only plot hole I can think of is that the background music did not continue throughout the entire recording. Had it continued, a different plot hole would have been created.

[eintx.livejournal.com]

Oh, sorry, I forgot. Will listen tonight!

[aunty_marion]

I listened to it; but alas, I'm very bad at taking information in and retaining it when listening! Which is why I never remember the names of songs - I do remember tunes, but have to actively learn the words. So although I enjoyed the story, and remember the broad plot, I don't remember enough to have spotted a plot hole.