Date: 2011-03-05 06:46 pm (UTC)
In that case, I would suggest that the sentence:

"If this book works as I intend, religious readers
who open it will be atheists when they put it down."

could have been considerably improved by the addition of the words "if they want to be." And then I would not have been impelled to write the aforegoing.


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