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avevale_intelligencer ([personal profile] avevale_intelligencer) wrote2010-05-18 05:51 pm

Sonnet

So, take my brain, still living, from the skull
And place it carefully upon your table.
Deploy your instruments, the sharp, the dull,
And all the subtle skills that you are able.
Summon th' etheric forces, call the fire
Of lightning to your bidding, bind the light,
Section the shrinking organ, and admire
The web of cells laid open to your sight.
Feed in the stimuli and watch the play
Of neurons; question me and I'll reply.
Naught will I stint to help you on the way;
No subject more co-operative than I.
And still, I'll wager, you will never find
One atom, cell, or process, to call MIND.

(I should perhaps point out that I am not asseverating that I personally have no mind. I worry sometimes.)

[identity profile] catalana.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 12:43 am (UTC)(link)
Interesting sonnet to dualism.

[identity profile] wyld-dandelyon.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
nice!

[identity profile] pocketnaomi.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 04:52 am (UTC)(link)
I might argue about 'process'. If mind is anything to me, it is process, and I might be able to come up with an explanation of what process I'd be looking for. I'm too tired to try to do it now, though.

[identity profile] tattercoats.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 07:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh! Rather fine!

[identity profile] lisande.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
(I should perhaps point out that I am not asseverating that I personally have no mind. I worry sometimes.)

This is unfair. Without this statement there would have been so many possibilities for jokes... ;)

Ah well, as it is I can only say: I like this sonnet, I like it very much! Thanks for sharing. :)

[identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 07:46 am (UTC)(link)
No mind? No matter. No matter? Never mind.

(By worrying about it you show that you have a mind. Cogito ergo sum. I think, therefore I am -- I think.)
aunty_marion: iGranny (iGranny)

Yeth, marthter!

[personal profile] aunty_marion 2010-05-19 12:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice one, Igor! (I wish I could write sonnets. Or even poetry.)

[identity profile] dickgloucester.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
*applauds* Going in memories.

[identity profile] pbristow.livejournal.com 2010-05-19 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
It's in the same place where the music is in the piano! =:o}

Also: Nice poem!

[identity profile] zanda-myrande.livejournal.com 2010-05-21 08:50 am (UTC)(link)
Or the little men in the telly.

[identity profile] caomhinmaca.livejournal.com 2010-05-20 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, you used asseverate in plain sight. What a thrill!
batyatoon: (the world is quiet here)

[personal profile] batyatoon 2010-05-21 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
Oh I like. *approves roundly*