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avevale_intelligencer ([personal profile] avevale_intelligencer) wrote2009-03-16 07:32 am

Yurk

From Wikipedia's entry on the band Renaissance:

"As touring began to grind on them, the band gradually dissolved one by one."

I do not think that was what the writer meant to say...

[identity profile] redaxe.livejournal.com 2009-03-16 08:13 am (UTC)(link)
And here's me trying to find a clever quip based on either softly and silently vanishing away, or, alternatively, quietly, overhead, the stars going out.

Either way, being ground down does make things dissolve more easily. :-)

(More seriously, I'd be unsurprised if that was written by a native speaker of Italian or Portugese, as Italy and Brazil both have lots of Renaissance fans.)