Sadly, no. aunty_marion is very busy, has woes of her own at the moment and needs to make money with her time. soren_nyrond has very kindly gone through OIK, and someone else is going to read it for me and try to spot inconsistencies and plot problems, but again, they're busy and have a life, like everyone else. It's basically down to me, and yes, it is difficult, but I'll get there. Persistence is one of my virtues; it's only the cost of the repeat proof copies that gets me down.