ext_4493 ([identity profile] pbristow.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] avevale_intelligencer 2011-09-09 09:06 pm (UTC)

[RE-READS WITH THAT IN MIND]

[DELIGHTED CHCUCKLE] Yes, that very nearly works! It's those "oo" rhymes on every third line that beg for a "-ya!". =:o>

Well... mine's a bit more jaunty, and of the same musical genre as Talis' "X-Libris". It wobbles around a bit uncertainly so it needs pinning down in various places, which I usually do by humming it to myself for a couple of days while doing other things and seeing it what shape it settles into.


I've also taken, ah, certain liberties with the ending...

On your own head be it. =:o}



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