ext_5446 ([identity profile] redaxe.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] avevale_intelligencer 2009-03-16 08:13 am (UTC)

And here's me trying to find a clever quip based on either softly and silently vanishing away, or, alternatively, quietly, overhead, the stars going out.

Either way, being ground down does make things dissolve more easily. :-)

(More seriously, I'd be unsurprised if that was written by a native speaker of Italian or Portugese, as Italy and Brazil both have lots of Renaissance fans.)

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